Fashion Post Practice #2

Ok so now I'm done gaming for a bit I've got a couple of fashion photos in a single post to try my hand at. Please PLEASE comment or critique how i'm doing with these. It's a whole different ball game doing ad-copy compared to being a fashion blogger.

List Of Items On The Above Post:

Doux - Dua Hair *Bicolor Pack* - http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Secrets/149/152/22 / https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/168100

NO Cabide - PJ Set - http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Vardor/203/31/22 / https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/148357

Cureless - Moon Revenge Tattoo Set http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Curemore/122/53/24 / https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/92616

K{<3}P - Bat Girl Plats - Black (actual title pending, i gotta log in to check) https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/191180

YS*YS - Angela Skin Tone 000 https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/13353 Izzie's - Black Lipstick (Halloween Gift 2018) (unpacked) http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Izzies/115/125/32 Booty's Beauty - Glitter Eyes

Lelutka Erin Head - 2.0 (I'm still working on the boundless one.) http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/LeLutka/128/128/26

Maitreya 5.2 (I keep forgetting to wear 5.3) http://slurl.com/secondlife/Maitreya%20Isle/206/145/27/?title=Maitreya https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/14076

List of items on the above *Links/SLurls coming soon

Pacagia - Boots http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Furbetta/129/52/1002 Pacagia - Skirt (not seen) http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Furbetta/129/52/1002

Cureless - Patient Hoodie (Gacha)

http://maps.secondlife.com/secondlife/Curemore/122/53/24 / https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/92616

OLIVE - Cinnamon Split (See BLACK FRIDAY List for details on her sale!) Olive (Hair) - Cinnamon Split

Skin: YS&YS Angela Tone 00 https://marketplace.secondlife.com/stores/13353

Makeup: ~Blacklace Beauty~ Mismatch Shadows Candy/Apple

Ears: .:[PUMEC] :. - / Mesh Ears\ Hell wheel (AUGUST GROUP GIFT)

Eyes: *Booty's Beauty* Glitter Doll Eyes 4

Location for both: Backdrop City (The Kawaii Section)

If i've missed anything some of the information is listed here: https://starlordx1983.wixsite.com/ksblog/post/100-krankhaus-it-s-not-a-remix - I've got another draft post i've got to work on that is gonna be harder than this one :)

Let me know what other content you want - There's now a forum up, there's my discord and there's wix chat!